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Vampires.

The sun rises, From beyond the horizon,
Birds start to sing their dawn chorus;
The funeral march of vampires.
That will forever protect us.

They lay buried deep,
Down within their graves,
Trying to ignore that symphony that would accompany their death,
And resist their bloody craves.

They lick their fangs in satisfaction,
Picking flesh from their teeth,
Smiling oh so smugly,
As the humans donít know what lies beneath.

The sun reaches its high point in the sky,
They are cramping up with blood lust,
The wait is almost agonising,
But they know that their fate would still be dust.

Enter the night,
They hear he cry of the baying wolf,
Thousands of clammy hands hurtle through the earth,
As they look for a human to engulf.
About vampires.
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:icondivathehedgehog:
divathehedgehog Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student Artist
I LOOOOOVE IT!!!! Clap Love Heart 
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Death-Dealer123 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Student General Artist
love it
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:iconvampirelaw:
vampirelaw Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
so fab
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:iconlisettethehedgehog:
lisettethehedgehog Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
that's so true!!!...
beautiful
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:iconzooloo12345:
zooloo12345 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
Wonderful!! And genus!!
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:iconshadowphantomknight:
ShadowPhantomKnight Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011
*sniff*
This is so beautiful...
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heartmaddox Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Student Writer
thats really good :)
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:icondogcup123:
Dogcup123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011
This is such a beautiful Poem. It reminds me of .....
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:icondarklinkrules:
DarkLinkRules Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011
this is amazing!
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:iconlalalaimawesome:
lalalaImAWESOME Featured By Owner May 25, 2011
whoa seriously awesome
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xxxCrimeScenexxx Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
DO I HAVE TO SAY IT genusis
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Lolli333 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
hehe, nice and sinister!

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:icondragonz3000:
dragonz3000 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2009
have you ever read darren shan?
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:iconanimrak:
Animrak Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009
brilliance is all i have to say
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:iconyoda-vaderworshipper:
Awesome!

this made me think of a book series by a guy named David Wellington...

Great!
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner May 13, 2008
Thanks, thanks a lot! (for the fave too.) May I ask, what book series is that?
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:iconyoda-vaderworshipper:
I don't know the exact name of it...
but the two books so far are 13 bullets and 99 coffins...

you should read them, they're quite good, if a little short...

oh and you're welcome too...
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner May 14, 2008
Cool I'll keep my eye out for them, thanks!!
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:iconyoda-vaderworshipper:
You're welcome!

I found them at Barnes and Noble if that's a help...
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner May 15, 2008
I'll check Waterstones then (UK equivilent)
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:iconyoda-vaderworshipper:
Cool!
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Cece18J Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009
Yea I've read em to... pretty good... The thrid ones called Vampire Zero... Oh and yours is really gud to =] I like it
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MistressClaudia Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2008   Writer
You caught the imagery of my kind enough for me to check my fingernails to see if I had dirt under them, though, as for myself I sleep in crypts.

Wonderful write.

Sincerely,
Claudia
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2008
Thanks and thakd for the fave! Crypts are cool :)
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evillittledevil Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2008
....intersting....and odd
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
in a good or bad way?
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:iconevillittledevil:
evillittledevil Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
good way
i think of it
this way
if you're going
to post a comment
make it nice or
don't write at all
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Cool, thanks!
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:iconevillittledevil:
evillittledevil Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
np
sprinkles
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roxxi771 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
it was creative and sinister. like you caught the feelings of them.
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
Thanks, and thanks for the fave too!
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darklove666 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007   Writer
It's dark, I like it.
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2007
Thanks!
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AbundantAmenities Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2006  Hobbyist
I like it. Kinda scary, but it's got the sinister mood just like vampires. Some of the lines are too long, I'd change them around a bit. Good job!!

Really like it :clap:
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2006
Thanks for the advice, I'll try play around with it soon, and thanks.
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2006
Thanks for the advice, I'll try play around with it soon, and thanks.
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AbundantAmenities Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2006  Hobbyist
No problem! It was good.
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:iconxlilmisfitx:
xlilmisfitx Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2006
thanks
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:iconabundantamenities:
AbundantAmenities Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2006  Hobbyist
No problemo
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