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Vampires.

The sun rises, From beyond the horizon,
Birds start to sing their dawn chorus;
The funeral march of vampires.
That will forever protect us.

They lay buried deep,
Down within their graves,
Trying to ignore that symphony that would accompany their death,
And resist their bloody craves.

They lick their fangs in satisfaction,
Picking flesh from their teeth,
Smiling oh so smugly,
As the humans don’t know what lies beneath.

The sun reaches its high point in the sky,
They are cramping up with blood lust,
The wait is almost agonising,
But they know that their fate would still be dust.

Enter the night,
They hear he cry of the baying wolf,
Thousands of clammy hands hurtle through the earth,
As they look for a human to engulf.
©2006-2009 ~xlilmisfitx
:iconxlilmisfitx:

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:iconabundantamenities:
I like it. Kinda scary, but it's got the sinister mood just like vampires. Some of the lines are too long, I'd change them around a bit. Good job!!

Really like it :clap:

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This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
:iconxlilmisfitx:
Thanks for the advice, I'll try play around with it soon, and thanks.
:iconxlilmisfitx:
Thanks for the advice, I'll try play around with it soon, and thanks.
:iconabundantamenities:
No problem! It was good.

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This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
:iconabundantamenities:
No problemo

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This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
:icondarklove666:
It's dark, I like it.

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There's a thin line between what's real and what's fiction.
:iconxlilmisfitx:
Thanks!

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This is the story of a girl, who cried a river and drown the whole world
:iconroxxi771:
it was creative and sinister. like you caught the feelings of them.

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i cry for the perfect because they dont know what its like to be repaired

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